asdfghjkl01 发表于 2023-11-1 01:44   全显示 1楼
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夜月(2023-11-1 09:13)提示: 现在很多桥段都写烂了，想写出点新意，真要啄破脑袋
写的很精彩，不过最出人意料的还是唐妩和陆天床边对视的情节安排。说实话，陆天藏在床底这种情节一点也不稀奇，两人对视才是神转折。安排的既突兀，让人眼前一亮，同时也非常巧妙，前后人物应对也符合前情，确实笔力非凡。


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